Score: 8

"Freakin' awesome."

submission: Wake Me Up at E3

date: May 30, 2006

Five'd for awesome lyrics, and a guy with a triangle. Go, triangle.

On a side note, I wouldn't mind singing for you, and I DO have a microphone. Somewhere. >_>

Score: 1

"Awful."

submission: Math-A-Millions

date: May 28, 2006

Please refine your work before you submit it next time.

Normalize your audio, check your facts, type the word "you" out instead of leaving it "u", don't just rephrase the same question, fix incorrect questions, add some interest to the flash, make sure you have the rules of the game right, don't error out the last question, then we'll talk about whether or not this pile of crap could ever be any good.

Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: Trackstar

date: May 15, 2006

But not the best. Obviously there are little things that could be worked out, such as improving the graphics and getting rid of that white space outside the track...

Because I found an amusing glitch- I managed to get my score to about -360,000 with use of a second monitor and about 30s on the timer. Of course, I was doing over 1,200 MPH, so...

Score: 2

"Sigh..."

submission: Across the Nightmare

date: May 8, 2006

You shame a good song with an unremarkable, if not just plain awful animation, paired with poor drawings and pretty boring imagery. Put more time and effort into your work if you want it to survive longer/better.

Score: 5

"Good, but not great"

submission: Punch-Out Trilogy

date: May 6, 2006

This is a decent sprite flash, especially considering I beleive you used a few semi-original creations to help in this. It's fairly well done for the most part, but...

Your writing is...laughable. I'm sorry, but it's just not as good as it could be. Not to mention it's obvious you didn't proofread an instant of this. There's numberous misspellings and the like throughout the work, and the dialogue is less than inspirational at times, especially before the first fight scene in Chapter I.

A little cleaning up could do this flash a lot of good. Of course, using more than the FF7 soundtrack wouldn't hurt, too. I liked some of the introductory music, but really, FFVII is starting to get way, way overused. Something new would be appreciated.

You show talent, but I'd love to see you take it to the next level.

Score: 1

"Wait, what?"

submission: HecTix 3.5

date: April 19, 2006

What the hell? How about something in the flash that tells me what the hell is going on? Plus this thing is still buggy, it doesn't look very good, and the sound is pretty dang annoying after about four seconds. Please refine your work more before submitting it.

Score: 0

"Awful and too buggy"

submission: A classic game of tetris

date: March 29, 2006

I can't even begin to count the number of ridiculous, easy to avoid errors you've made in this flash.

First off, clearing one line should add 1 to the number of lines. Not 5, 7, or any of the other amounts I got. A double shouldn't be 18, a triple shouldn't be 12 or 20, and a quad/tetris shouldn't be 10.

Second, the score stopped working after I cleared four (10 by your game) lines. Just, stopped adding points altogether.

Third, you cut to game over when there's almost a quarter of the screen left in the playfield.

Fourth, your music is way too loud and comes out staticy and garbled.

Did you do any testing on this before you released it? Somehow, I doubt it.

Score: 6

"I'm sad."

submission: A Minute of Mario

date: March 19, 2006

I actually recognized the fact that you used sound clips from the game Sim Golf. Yes, I picked that out. Yes, I own the game. Yes, I enjoy it. Yes, I enjoyed this flash. Let me go cry in my beer now.

Score: 4

"This game's broken."

submission: Mad Pac

date: March 1, 2006

Fix the bugs, please. I was happily eating dots around level 5 or so, when I lured the ghosts far, far away from the rest of the dots I needed to eat and all of a sudden I was declared dead. Nothing had touched me, nothing happened, I was just dead. WTF?

Score: 5

"Decent."

submission: Super Mario Super Short

date: February 25, 2006

This is a good enough flash to survive on Newgrounds. It's animated pretty smoothly, the sounds aren't bad, no awful microphone work or anything. It's a bit trite/predictable, but not too bad. The movement of the sprites once the flash started, though, was much too fast, in my opinion. Try moving that down a bit.

And...that's a strange version of the Mario theme in the intro to the movie. Definitely not the game version. Interesting.

3/5, good, could use a touch of work. Good luck.